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Link six: Full moon rising by ~xorac:iconxorac:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Nature > Haiku & Eastern


A cirrus lens,
A perfect circle:
Moon halo.
©2009-2010 ~xorac
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A reply to [link] by :iconsilverwingsoffire:

1 reply from :iconsano-balron: - [link]

A reply from :iconsaiun: - [link]

Haiku chain gang Rules:

1. Get a big Harley, preferably with eastern decorations.
2. Beat people using large chains, in 17 syllables or less.

Ok seriously, here they are:

1. Reply to this poem in haiku form.
2. Then post the poem as a new deviation called "Link x+1: Haiku Chain Gang" where x is the link you reply too and include the instructions and rules.
3. Make sure to put a link to the poem you are responding to in the Artist Comments too.
4. Then leave a comment and link for the poem you are responding too so that they can add it to their Artists Comments.
5. Then wait to see more poems arrive and add them to the Artists Comments.


Oh and here's what a moon halo looks like : [link] . It's really quite hypnotic.

Tally ho!

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~SOLARTS Jun 27, 2009, 9:56:26 PM
Nice - although, I would lose the capitals, comma and full-stop, just because they make it seem sentence like.

a cirrus lens
a perfect circle:
moon halo

But that is just personal preference. Nice work!!!! If you are more comfortable writing them this way then please don't let my preferences on punctuation put you off. And THANKS for continuing the link!!

Awesome work!!!

:)

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~xorac Jun 27, 2009, 10:08:05 PM
thanks. :)

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~SOLARTS Jun 27, 2009, 10:10:49 PM
:)

Pleasure.

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"We are intent on reducing art to its simplest expression, which is love." (Andre Breton)
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*Sano-Balron Jun 28, 2009, 3:34:09 AM
Just replied to your poem! [link]

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~xorac Jun 28, 2009, 3:36:38 AM
sweet! keep at it. I'll update in the comments.

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~xorac Jun 28, 2009, 3:44:51 AM
updated :D

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*saiun Jun 29, 2009, 9:08:10 AM
I love this one! =) You might consider dropping "a" from the first line just to prevent repetition.
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~xorac Jun 29, 2009, 9:24:21 AM
thanks ! :D

but i thought the repetition made it more poetic. =P .
but it sounds good without the a too. decisions decisions...


and thanks for the fave too.

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